peanut butter or ham?

[ranter]

and, the two forces battle for ultimate control of what they say.

they stretch me out, to unbelievable far thought places

union carpenters buld up immense wooden stairways reaching up towards the sky and these greasy mechanics turn the levers and oil the crankers to keep the platform that the workaholic engineers designed in an all nite frenzy-all telling me to move in their way, to become one of them, the sun ticks away and the crafty painters paint where i am indulging me in immagineable sceneries depicting paradises of olden yore-of treasures far wise and near-and the beautifullly sculpted sculptor designs quiet marble statues exclaiming my greatness for all to hear-while eccentric authors spin tales and legends of my epical life and greatness of my deeds and musicians sing dance strum notes never before heard for human ears claiming divine inspiration at my heels and in my dust.
but, it all still escapes me
for all i now, these choices and thse depictions leace me unfullfilled in my quest for that ultimate platform or definite piece of art in my life.

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[ranter]

i know i know i know i know i know i know i know i know i know i know i know i know i know i know i know i know i know i know i know i know i know i know i know i know so hush

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[Hannibal]

I liked this one. This story/idea/poem worked really well for me to read. At first I thought "oh man, this is gonna be long" but it read smooth, quick, and interstingly. I really liked this one. *nods* Hats off to you suh.

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[Pixelina]

i think you have an interesting writing style
i just noticed it cause it's pretty apparent
in this one..which i did like by the way...

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